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Monday, August 15, 2016

Improving comments

Hi there
today we were doing cyber smart we were improving peoples comments.
What we had to do was to go find comments in a page that looked like this. 
Then we copy and pasted the comments and went to this page, 
we wrote the comment in the first box then we
wrote another comment in the other box but more improved like what i have done in the page on top.
We then had to go back to the blog where we got the the comment from and publish our own improved comment.

Tuesday, August 9, 2016

What makes a good comment?


Today we were doing cyber smart. For cyber smart we were writing about, what makes a good comment? 
We went to a little slide that had two videos, they had all the information about what makes a good comment. One of the video was from america and the other one was from the UK. They gave us a lot of information so we had a go at writing all our points on to a pad-let so other people can see on our own blogs. Some of the points they gave us, we had already covered but it was good to go over what we had learnt.